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Ray W
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Shadesay

Post by Ray W » Fri Aug 13, 2021 2:47 pm

Lonely walking night often siren sings
not to yawning eyes or blind ears but other things
from chalk-faced listener leaf to moon-wrinkled creek,
star-glossed whisperings
softly flit light-knit wings, float
like wind-tamed shadows coaxing nameless remote
to blush nest-nuzzled beak or shale-caked cheek
mime remembering
times depth-touched some quiet whenwhere alone,
all at once sensing love of sigh life, Whole at home--
reflective moats of sun-flaked grass, sky-hi tree and wavy limb
review numb-drum notes until marching dawn starts a new felt-heart hymn.

BBrookshire

Re: Shadesay

Post by BBrookshire » Sun Aug 15, 2021 12:46 pm

Ray W wrote:
Fri Aug 13, 2021 2:47 pm
moon-wrinkled creek
This brought back a wonderful memory. Thank you.

Ray W
Posts: 178
Joined: Fri Feb 28, 2020 8:09 pm
Location: Tennessee

Re: Shadesay

Post by Ray W » Mon Aug 16, 2021 3:51 pm

You're welcome. I conjured that up a couple weeks ago, based on a place nearby. I like writing
the "nature" poems even more than ones mocking kosher kooks and their multicultureless mutations 8-)

BBrookshire

Re: Shadesay

Post by BBrookshire » Mon Aug 16, 2021 10:10 pm

Ray W wrote:
Mon Aug 16, 2021 3:51 pm
You're welcome. I conjured that up a couple weeks ago, based on a place nearby. I like writing
the "nature" poems even more than ones mocking kosher kooks and their multicultureless mutations 8-)
I like reading the nature ones more as well. :D

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